by Rubiyat Alam
(Miramar, Florida, USA)
College Essay
by Alexander E. Lucas
(Silver Spring, MD )
Person with Greatest Influence on My Life - I did some soul searching and I felt my Dad has help to mold me and frame my future and the greatest influence on my life. My Dad, Allan E. Lucas, Jr. has been there every step of the way for me. When you think of influence and faming your future you should search out to someone with great leadership skills, can relate to life, integrity, reputation, old school, teaches you about culture and current news events and discipline. My dad fights for the rights of himself, family and people. I am academically athletically, well rounded, gifted student who excels at Springbrook High School. My plan is to pursue my degree in Computer Information Systems; then I will pursue my education while becoming a United States Marine Corps Officer. I pray for my dad to see me in the future with greater goals and achievements he set for himself that I can reflect and demonstrate the same. It’s the man within a man.
I want to go to a college that demonstrates the foundation that my dad demonstrates as well as myself over the years and more years to come. I believe college can take me to the next level and continue helping me obtain my goals. My dream is still to continue being involved in the community, currently I have over 505 community service hours. I have and I will in the future continue my involvement in extracurricular activities such as football, track lacrosse, martial arts, music, piano and drawing. I am still an active member of the NAACP and GapBuster’s Inc. Leaders-In-Training program, Alpha Leadership Development and World Academic Sports Team. I play both sides of the field in Varsity Football as a Team Captain, since 9th grade, running back and outside linebacker. I won two NAACP ACT-SO awards, Bronze and Silver in poetry. I would like to write a book of poems one day. The reason why I want to go to college is because in my eyes the Bowie State University is one of the tops. Second I have a close friend, Malcolm Clyburn who attends Morehouse and he demonstrates integrity and I see how Morehouse has impacted his life. Last reason just like my dad has influenced me and I have influenced some people in my lifetime I want to continue this trend and be the man that can have an impact other lives for the future.
Dreams really do come true when you set your expectations “high”. I can say that my future will be very bright for me! I can truly see myself as a 4 year full time athletic scholar, who will graduate with a degree, and who will be an example, role model for any future college. My dream framing my future!
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by Sarah Benesh
(Clark, New Jersey)
A person who has influenced me – College Essay Family is an extraordinarily important aspect of my life. My mother, above everyone else in my life, has had a significant influence on me. My mom has said that if the whole world turns their back on you, your family will always be there for you. She has always been there for me. She is an absolutely amazing human being and a great role model. Everyday I see how she handles having four children, manages a household and a career. Through her example, I have learned to make good decisions and be very responsible.
My mother inspires me everyday. She has taught me to not only respect other people's opinions, but to formulate my own opinions as well. She showed me that I can do anything I put my mind to and has told me to always stand up for myself. I started to play soccer when I was in second grade and I came to love it. Years ago when I was playing soccer, I was not getting much playing time during games. I was not one of the strongest players but I played well. I was disappointed about the games and talked to my mom about it. She said rather than her talking to the coach I should remind the coach that I was not getting enough playing time. During the next game I stood by the coach and asked to be put in. It worked. I got more playing time and the coach noticed how well I played. He complimented me on my game and from that point on I didn't have to ask for more playing time. I am glad that she encouraged me to stand up for myself. From this experience, I learned that in life you have to fight for what you want.
My mom has shown me that we should not only take from the community, but also give back. I volunteer with the Girl Scouts and at a local church as much as possible. With my church youth group I have visited a Veteran's home to talk with the residents and keep them company. We also have done a rake and run where we rake the leaves of elderly or disabled people. I was voted onto a core team by my peers. On the core team I help the advisers lead the group at meetings and volunteer services.
Because of my mom's encouragement, I work extremely hard at school and everything I do. She has inspired me to push myself to the limit and beyond. My mom has taught me to live my life to its fullest. Life is a journey and my mom has taught me many things along the way. College is the next step in my journey and I am going to take everything I have learned along with me. My mom has not only influenced my life, but is my absolute hero. The lessons she has taught me will be instilled in me forever.
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